

Follow along as a public elementary school in Chicago integrates the iPad into its first through fifth grade classrooms.



After spending two hours a day this week watching seventh graders fill in bubbles on our state's standardized test, I am finding myself thinking about assessment. Specifically, I am thinking about the many ways the iPad has enriched and strengthened our daily assessment practices -- and the value I see in authentic, embedded, process-rich assessment that informs and improves instruction. Technology like the iPad offers incredible ways to gather meaningful data that shows student thinking and creates a rich and detailed picture of learning. It can also make assessment more efficient, save teachers time, and open opportunities for more responsive teaching.We’re in the heart of our unit on poetry. My students have learned several strategies that poets use including repetition, onomatopoeia, alliteration, visual imagery and line breaks. This week a few students wanted to draft their poems on the iPad. We had not tried this before, so I decided to let my students “have a go.”
As I watched my students carefully, I tried to think about how this experience was different than writing or publishing on paper. I noticed two big things right away.
First, the concept of line breaks and how to use them effectively was evident when writing on the iPad. Planning line breaks and reworking them to fit in a handwritten poem is labor intensive for the average first grade student. When writing on the iPad, line breaks become easy to fix, move and manipulate. This results in line breaks that make an impact for both the reader and writer.
Second, kids were more likely to revise their drafts when working on the iPad. Similar to what I observed with line breaks, it was easy for kids to manipulate the text and change the layout without having to erase, rewrite and reorganize. Many times I saw my students write a few lines then share their work with a think partner. When the think partner would provide feedback, kids were more willing to use the feedback to enhance their poem because insertion or revision was a quick fix on the iPad. In previous writing attempts, I had not seen my students work so flexibly or be as open to feedback.
There were additional benefits to writing on the iPad including the ease of organization and diverse options for sharing. Not all students desired to draft on the iPad and that is perfectly fine by me. I want to provide my students many options for thinking, writing and sharing their work. I hope to create an environment where kids move seamlessly between tools, modalities and resources.
It seems as though the students who drafted on the iPad were inspired by this experience–many wrote multiple poems and 4 or 5 are creating an ePub anthologies. I’ll try to provide an update next week on Poetry Friday.
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you can see, the comments come up but not the text that the student is
referring to. This can be fixed if the student highlights the sentence
or phrase that inspired that thought. This is what I plan on teaching
my students next. I think that it will be very powerful for them to
articulate specific words or phrases that have triggered their thinking.I notice that there is a lot of little text boxes and not one big one.Students began to see that the article was visually and graphically organized as well as organized in the writing. This was one of the reasons we chose this genre, to help students learn to organize.
For 12345 i see paw prints
Yeah wait why is it called high five?They began to look at the creative details such as creative title. High Five is a feature in Faces Magazine every month.
I like the author’s use of alliterations : five fascinating factsThey weren’t noticing much of the writing style so I made the above comment to get them thinking of it.
Started a little intro saying what your gonna learn. =]
The writer was bringing the reader inWhen the conversation got too big I started adding new questions to help them focus more.
